Tujhe chheen le koi..aik Sher by Jaun Eliya

ai shakhs ab to mujh ko sabhi kuchh qabool hai
yah bhi qabool hai ke tujhe chheen le koi

2 thoughts on “Tujhe chheen le koi..aik Sher by Jaun Eliya

  1. tanhaa Canada Ubuntu Linux Mozilla Firefox 1.5.0.8 December 12, 2006 at 4:34 pm

    wow!

    gorgeous couplet! especially the second line is just a killlllller!

    and Nadia, no praise is enough for your presentation skills.

    Amit

  2. nadia United States Windows XP Internet Explorer 6.0 December 13, 2006 at 11:10 am

    Amit,

    thank you so much. yah sher..waqai buhat qaatilaana hai. mujhe JE ka yah sher buhat buhat passand hai.

    can you feel the calm in the picture? the calm that falls after a storm. jab sab tabaah ho jaaye to phir kuchh bhi baaqi nahiN rehta, iss sher meN itni pain hai ke maiN yaqeen nahiN kar sakti kuchh lafzoN ko saath mila kar likhne se aik aisi feeling ka izHaar bhi mumkin hai jo beyaan karni buhat hi mushkil hai.
    iss sher meN pain ki woh haD dikhaayi hai jab koi hadd baaqi nahiN rehti, tab kuchh bhi ho farq nahiN parhta..

    i LOVE this sher, in fact the WHOLE ghazal is amazing.

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